This Is A Game Out Poetry Class Did. We Write Down A Line And Then Had Someone Else Write One.?
15. Feb, 2010 
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What can I say about a man called Hans who steals my lunch every single day?
He looks just plain stupid. He’s missing teeth, broken nose, and a laugh that would torture your ears.
Pity shall fly from my tongue while anger will subside
In the heart.
In the lungs.
No man can escape his past but hopefully learn by it, so Hans hopefully will get a part time job so he can afford to buy his lunch.
But maybe Hans is a poor old man who was screwed by the government and his food stamps won’t cover it.
But did you know that Hans was once a diplomat and that his diplomacy ran dry like your granny?
But he never ran dry like a thunderstorm he keeps coming and coming.
Ew?
Hans is just like the rest of us
Trying to get by.
Stop stealing my lunch, Hans property is 9/10th’s of the law dontcha know?
So leave it alone Hans.
What’s mine is mine
What’s yours is yours
There’s a line between us.
Lunch, Brunch and Dinner.
Maybe he’s Han solo… you know…. from Star Wars.
I heard Hans was a Nazi.
Escaped to Brazil.
Living like a King.
Under the big sculpture of Jesus.
So I tell him gimme back my “****”!
Gimme my pride, my strength, and my integrity.
And here you can take my heart break, embarrassment, and sorrow.
Perhaps next time I’ll stop Hans in his tracks and enjoy my lunch for once.
that is pretty awesome, that is a good idea.
Pretty good for a “Round Robin.” I enjoyed it.
it would be great if it actually hung together.
Nice!
Haha! It´s fun! Well, I don´t know about poem, it feels a bit more like a discussion at some places.
i can just see throught the poem and i can definetly tell you guys had fun. especially the random line about ‘under the big sculpture of Jesus’ that wuz funny! i can tell you guys bursted out laffing on that one…
i like it…
hahaha, it was funny… I did this game when I was in High School like 3 times with my class.. its a nice way to exercise imagination, and a fun way to get the class more into each other…. Good Job =)